Hi Roland,

- on starting site you try to show too much - I'd dig deep and pick just one picture that truly represent You?
- On presentation site "You tube" window looks awkward and puts a shade on your written presentation - I'd hide the video under the link and add some pictures along with your personal story that is written there?
- I like the Gallery - tho maybe it would be nice to put some description under the pictures?

Please don't take any offence on above - it is just my personal oppinion and I guess it doesn't mean much. For a reference take a look at the following site - it may be a bit too much - but Hofer is selling with style (and music

) :

http://www.hoferwaffen.com/hofer_1.php?lang=en

Good luck with your work!